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[MGStick 2: Swordweilder]

Your Ratings

Okay, here goes.

I have a few suggestions for you, first off, use colors on your fonts that people can read (eg. red on red is no good). Second, while alllll that text is going, I think it'd be cool to have images of those scenes fading in and out in the background (just a suggestion). I liked a few of the animations you had on there, it looks like you put alot of effort into most of that, I didn't like the overhead thing though. I'm not sure if you ment to or not, but the head:body ratio was kinda off a little.
Well. it's 1 a.m. that's all I can think of for now, I hope that helped some. If you need any more suggestions or anything, email me. Or something.

Pointed responds:

I don't remember putting any fonts that didn't match (at least on my computer they worked out fine). And yes, the head:body ratio is off a little bit. I noticed it, but I'm not going to go back and edit everyone's head again. As for the animation, I did work hard on that. The ending scene was hard... Editing 22 instances at a time to get an animation is hella hard, and it pisses me off to see ppl hate my work.
I wasn't really sure what ppl would think of the overhead view this time... In the first one, the some ppl liked it.

Thanx for the review.

[Monster Love]

Nice

You had some good ideas in that, I like the way you used simple animation skills to make some stuff. Kinda pushing the boundries of simplicity. In a good way. Congrats.